I have to say, Grey Wind and Gravity are my favorites of this selection. As for the rest, well, I seem to have had a theme in mind for this week of haiku. Grey Wind originated while I was trying to write for the #haikuchallenge (feel), but wound up going a different direction. The rest actually fit the required word.
You know, there's something very therapeutic about writing haiku. I like to imagine haiku in the poetry world is what Sudoku is in the number-puzzle world; it's brief and condensed, but can be a real thinker.
Or, maybe, I'm just talking out my arse. Whatever the case, I wrote another eight haiku:
You know, there's something very therapeutic about writing haiku. I like to imagine haiku in the poetry world is what Sudoku is in the number-puzzle world; it's brief and condensed, but can be a real thinker.
Or, maybe, I'm just talking out my arse. Whatever the case, I wrote another eight haiku:
Grey Wind
The wind howls through grass
And whispers between the trees
This grey evening
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Not Felt
(#haikuchallenge 3/22/16)(feel)
Can you say you feel?
Can you say you ever loved?
When you looked at me?
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Gravity
(#haikuchallenge 3/23/16)(always)
The ever-presence
The gravitational pull
Always brings us down
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The Hole
(#haikuchallenge 3/24/16)(pull)
Why do you stay down?
Pull yourself up off the ground
And out of that hole
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The Hole II
(#haikuchallenge 3/25/16)(deep)
Why don't you listen?
Come on, it can't be that hard
Six feet's not that deep
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Black Umbrellas
(#haikuchallenge 3/26/16)(tardy)
The heaven's tears fall
The descent coming tardy
The ritual's over
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Drive Home
(#haikuchallenge 3/27/16)(now)
Now our song comes on
Through the rain and the static
Is it clearer there?
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Unasked
(#haikuchallenge 3/28/16)(question)
I'll hold on to you
I'll keep you safe in my heart
My unasked question
The ever-presence
The gravitational pull
Always brings us down
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The Hole
(#haikuchallenge 3/24/16)(pull)
Why do you stay down?
Pull yourself up off the ground
And out of that hole
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The Hole II
(#haikuchallenge 3/25/16)(deep)
Why don't you listen?
Come on, it can't be that hard
Six feet's not that deep
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Black Umbrellas
(#haikuchallenge 3/26/16)(tardy)
The heaven's tears fall
The descent coming tardy
The ritual's over
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Drive Home
(#haikuchallenge 3/27/16)(now)
Now our song comes on
Through the rain and the static
Is it clearer there?
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Unasked
(#haikuchallenge 3/28/16)(question)
I'll hold on to you
I'll keep you safe in my heart
My unasked question
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